Voted For: Paranoid
Mizz Fyre: your drop was well structured, and it flowed nicely, what i feel i didnt like in yours is its center around the plot, you sacrificed vocabulary and imagery to make sure your story flowed, even though its a topcial, id like to see some complexity and detail within the lines aswell, nice drop i think uve got potential to b droppin sum drama queen type shit
Paranoid: your verse was well structured and it also flowed well, your vocab was obvious and shyed away from simply going with the simple and obvious which was cool, kept me interestd, nice imagery keep it up
-No hate....1
-AC