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Middle Weight
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IP:
it was ight 4 a 1st drop but change ya structure up from tha way it is into stanza form, creative, vocab was good, but go into depth next time u write a poem ~*fa sho*~
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Choose words carefully when you address me
You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me
(Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee
Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me
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