Loving this collab, concept you guys went with is nice and interesting in fact. I can't really see who dropped best because both brought something of their own to the piece. Vocab was excellent, had nice level of complexity yet it remained understandable for the readers. Flow was good, had multis, internal rhyming which all improved the flow. Imagery was there but the strongest aspect was the emotion without a doubt. Had nice metaphorical images, poetic and insightful wordings, props to both of you for this one!

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