Right, i had 2 re-read this piece bout three or foour times to full understand what it was about, cos it was real deep n yall said a lot of shit, both of you were really on par wid vocab and language, theres parts of this which are pretty much poetic and not just rhymes as if it was a poem, structurally theres verses were both of u fall off, the flow is choppy, yall need to learn where to properly place punctuation aswell, this was a dope ass read betta than the usual 50Cent Remixes u see in open mic these dayz..keep droppin

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