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Old 07-06-05, 11:25 AM   #4
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All ya’ll falsifiers, claimin ya’ll know something, makin up
words that ain’t even drummin.
Ya dissin on the ones who can pass you up, just remember that
when you see their record on the up.
Don’t know what I’ll be doin in 25 years, maybe singing in
church maybe shiftin gears.
You don’t know me so don’t try to judge me, my words are
the only way I can show you me.
Cuz here isn’t the test, it’s the real world at its best, where ya
meet face to face and put your life to the rest.
So tell me now, is Jesus your pal? Or have you forgotten him
in the search of perfection?

^i liked that...the most....i could relate

this was good...you had some nyce concepts and ideas in this...good vocab...different from what ive read in here.....keep writing and stay up....
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