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Old 07-06-05, 12:17 PM   #13
~Lady Fiya~
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Rahim- his flow is aight, delivery needs some work. other than that, he was str8..

i like the sample chorus.

Deadly Vision- better flow, there's not a lotta pops in this song (which is a plus), sounds aite lyrically

Tha Q- you got the best quality, flow was on point, delivery was so-so, lyrically you need to step your game up some notches.

all y'all are pretty much on the same level, so nice choice of people to collab with.

overall, sounded ok...

stay up..
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