Thread: Tekneek vs Payn
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Old 07-06-05, 04:11 PM   #11
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Voted For: Tekneek

im so happy we could have this meetin, but it aint a happy greetin
cuz this weak spittin trip is in fa a beating
0/10
aight look skinny home boi face it kid.
if you were 20 stone u still would'nt make it big.
0/10
imma do 20 lines plenty time to land these punches.
a land 1 each bar you land 1 each hundred.
2/10
you should make an alias with the name chaff.
coz reading your shit's one big PAYN in the ass.
6/10
there's an old saying the GOOD die young.
so i guess you'll be around tom see your grandkid's son.
7/10
see tek never loose's to this type of opponent.
the type that get there 30 second's early and still miss the moment.
7/10
payn will be terrified of mics when my lines-sre-finished.
sever-ya-head put that shit in a "BRIEFCASE", now "MIND-YA-BUSINES.
9/10
this herb cant rip me in this battle imma Rip-Apart this kids Text.
I'll smash-ya-Chest wit Sharp-Objects.........................
................... n make ya ass BOUNCE like FALSE-CHECKS.
7/10
a dont know why i bother battling ya pathetic type.
u 23years old and in your bedroom fo fuck's sake get a life.
0/10
go on da mtv show but da fact iz payn still wouldnt have true flow
cuz wen payn spitz, I only 'CBS/SEE BS' lyke da fu.kkin news show.
7/10
Son, you might as well list ya style under miscellaneous
Here's a clue, the shit ain't wordplay if you still gotta explain it.
7/10
You bein a dope mc, is non existent like RuPaul's clit is.
Cant tell if your dick or pussy....lol....like topless infants.
10/10
look payn ain't shit, I ain't lose he ain't even rappin' right
Damn right I'm an asshole, this pussy ain't even half as tight
10/10..lol


Dawg u couldnt hit me wit a punch if i was Movin in Slow Mo
so, "Craig Davis", return to R&B and to Doin ya Solo's
4/10
Whats worse is u Know Tho..but put it to use..its Knowledge
u could use some..lookin nappy as a dude who'd be workin McDonald's
1/10
no College n doin it for years..but still never Witness Promotions
never gettin tha Notion that he looks greasier than Fish In the Ocean
4/10
this Kid should've Noticed..i aint the type to be delivered Fillers n Brag Lines
cuz im a Killer who Has Rhymes that intoxicate like a 'Miller' when u've Had 9!*
8/10
Damn..this phony Sixshot revlover cat thought he really could Try Me?
wit sickness in my veins i'm resistin then killin this 'I.V.'!
3/10
battlin me wasnt Wise G..effortless..plus tha Madness jus Started
wit tar on ya heels u only able to keep pace wit Rappaz in Charlotte**
7/10
Ur my class science project how i gotcha Dissected in Session
plus ya spits AINT SHIT like a bulimic's Digestional Methods! damn!
9/10...lost a point, for hyping yourself
ya verse containin more forced multis than if i Threw Whores At 'Em..
n then they had that unwanted sex but while havin Two Orgasms
7/10
Wit some multis n metas ya style's still more played than Nintendo Games
you'd think i'm smokin O's of dro tha way i'm blowin 'Indo' Away!
7/10
--:time to finish him:--
shoulda taken tha Craig Davis approach n packed them tunes wit da Sappy Flutes
I'm Raw, he has tha females screamin "Aww Naww" once seein his Nappy Roots! haha!
5/10
its over!

tekneek 72/130...which is .55385
payne 55/100...which is .55

tekneed wins by .00385 of a point

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