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Old 07-06-05, 06:49 PM   #15
Acuity
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Voted For: Kein Witz

Pen N Paper - i dunno from ya genereal demeanour on RV i expected more from you lol, your verse lacked structure and this took away from ots flow, which made your idas hard to follow, i think you took the simplist approach to the topic and u did cover it well tho, vocab was decent - 7/10

Kein - didnt know u waz dope like dis wid topicals cuz, the vocabulary was on a level just below mine which is still dope, and u used it effectively, ur drop hada nice story to it, structure was itght and oncise n shizzle flowed well, ur approach was not as simplistic as pen n paper, you went into detail and left a very enjoyable topical - 8.5/10

Vote- Kein Witz
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