Voted For: 9th Degree

9th Degree
He ducked the last battle, so we're callin' him fowl
But I'll just KO-Trini like I bought him a vowel
Could have been better, but good wordplay.
He said beatin' me will make him the king, well in that case
He might take the belt, 'cuz from me all he deserves is a waste
Should have spelled it the other way. Decent
I'll blow you away, you made a mistake to step into the whirlwind
'Cuz I haven't hit KT this hard since my last girlfriend
Self glorification mostly.
Ah fuck it, I make a few jokes and then he'll get pissed
But last time I watched for Trini was when I was six
Lmao, nice closer.

Overall, this isn't your best verse, but it was pretty good. The closer really won it for you. Work on your wording a tad though, cuz that waist bar confused me and it kind of hindered your punches.

K-Trini
Quack,Quack?Sayin I duck battles?I'll fuck ya up like Cosby's hairline
A LiLsambo with bad hair?nah,more like wannabe rambo with bad rhymes
Bad punch, and you dissed yourself.
9th Degree be hating on muther fuckers who go to porn stores**
Cause He stay "broke,"no one listens to him like the school laws
Weak personal and punch.
Wanna hate on me causeI'm Trini?But where you from 9th??
Like vampires,you refrain from "sheddin light" with all ur might
Bad set up line, personal could have been better.
Change your name to "clubs",cause you constantly stay minature
&Wat sopposely gangsta puts a Pokemon card in his signature?
Bad set up, and weak personal. Where does he say he is gangster?

Your set up lines were really weak along with your personals. You had some decent concepts, but you really didn't word them right. Work on punches and personals.

Overall, 9th just had a better verse overall. His punches and personals hit harder, had some good wordplay, and overall his concepts were better. Both need to work on your wording, however.

No hate, just an honest opinion.

v- 9th Degree

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