Voted For: Abash

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Yo my nigga how you gonna figure that you're ill g,
Nigga think's he hard when homosexually he's guil-ty,
homosexual lines = , every homo concept is played cuz - 6/10
With split personlities he couldn't beg props from himself,
Cos the only time you hard is when you Bashin to the top shelf, *
you courd have whored this kid of his name bre, decent attempt at a personal nonetheless, gd flow - 7.5/10
Lyrically i see your ass aint even gained a full license,
Already you're a has-been gettin knocked out like tyson...
this was a weak ass closer fam, tyson linez :nono - 6/10

-up creativity
-come original
-use personals better
-work on syllable counts
-write 2 abeat

this bitch scrambling for war, yet he still unprepared.
so i told him to bring the shit - dude showed w/ his underwear!
gave me a chuckle, not too bad, g flow n set-up -7/10
spitting sick words? nah. in this race you'll be placed 3rd.
cuz souljah dont need broadband, to be band-width herbs!
wordplay is decent, dope flow to line, couldve have been wrded better but original and creative - 7.5/10
we commenced war, and you getting smashed with shells.
& even ur name shows, you cant be complete without the L!*
this bar was weak, worded poorly and a shitty concept, it made me go -_-.....-7/10

-up personal use
-better punches

no hate to eitha of you...UK-AC

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