listening..

wow.. very good in the begining.. very nice multi's... and yeah there are very good metaphors.. oh shyt i luv the chorus man.. very creative!! that was hella nice... wow.. very creative man!!! like seriously wow.. lol.. 2nd verse now.. *listening* *gets jealous* lol.. very nice multi's again.. the devliery was just plain great man.. was this one of the beats you bought?? like wow.. seriously very good... 3rd verse.. man once again just plain good man.. you keep elevating with every song when im not lol.. damn you man.. lol.. all i could say is wow man.. 10/10.. the chorus is just wow. the shyt on the left n right. thats jst amaznig.. perfect beat for these lyrics.. very nice..

*Starts writting, tryin to do better*

Werd ^

*fails*

*cries*

lol good job man.. i could seriously hear this in the radio man.. good job

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