yo this was some hot ish in my perspective...good concept and good imagery....nicely writtin not all stretch out and shit....good use of vocab and worded OK....metaphors were decent and nicely played...opener was aight and closer was killer on Indephs verse....opener on paranoid was decent and closer was not that bad....

Going wrong ways, I stand locked down in Frustration
I’d never start using meditation to ease my Temptation
good line from paranoid^^

It all balances out on the milky way,my tempers' is feelin pain..
A moment,mental bruises'll heal,after twisted a million ways
good line from Indeph^^

overall-8/10