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Old 07-06-05, 11:45 PM   #6
Ca'lam
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Originally Posted by Dabatos
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why do i recognize this beat?? i hate this beat.. well beats nice. i hate that girls voice thats singing..

verse: very nice lyrics.. nice strong verse.. yeah flow is off some places but its really nice lyrics.. really good multi's..

chorus:chorus err i hate that effin voice.. errr its effin scary as hell! lol

Verse: Lyrics is nice.. very good verse agani.. same like other one.. raelly strong n shyt.. good flow and everything...

chorus: *puts chorus on mute*

verse: oh theres no third lol.

overall strong verses.. pretty good.. never heard u before so good first impression.. try working on delivery more if u can. but this kind of song isn't of need of delivery..

7/10

n leave feed on my freestyle wen ever..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197996


cause i used tghe beat .. but i thought million eyes was straight.. aight track.. but ya kids solo joint was fire.. i thought shit was dope for real
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