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Voted For: R-Rated

Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
-Played. The set up Lines was messed up for me cause of the grammar. And the punchline (2nd line) was played out.

This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.
-Hmmmmm Really wasn't a effective punch, couldnt find it insulting. Weak

where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
-Ok Played wordplay and weak punch

jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
-Weak Punch.

your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker.
-Ok for once, this was a good punch nice wordplay and a good closer.

=overall this verse was weak from the start, punches weren't connecting. Wordplays are played. The closer is what stood out the most though.

This Kid Reminds Me of A Commercial Disclaimer..How This Fakes Been Caught..
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..
-Hmmmm I like the 1st line, the 2nd line was ok the concept was played though, but word differently

In This Battle You're Beat but If This Was A Costume Contest You Woulda Won..
Because You Next To Wackness....Is The Defining Moment of Exactness Son..
-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA nice punch, decent

This Kid Reminds Me Of G-Unit....How This Kid Comes Without Game..
How He Gonna Beat Me Lyrically?..When This Cat Mispells His Own Name..
-Decent punch

Like Cheap Car Owners...When Despretly In Need He Refuses To Re-Tire..
And If This Was A Game..Seriously...In Levels I'm Thirty-Three Higher..
-I see glor which didnt make a punch in the 2nd line but i like the wordplay you did on the 1st line

In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support..
-Lol Nice wordplay and a good closer

Overall= I liked your verse, had some decent punches loved the g-unit line and the halloween line too. Creative and decent.

Ok my vote goes to R-Rated. He had better punches than TekNeek, with decent wordplays and good punches. Tekneek i felt your punches were weak and the grammar is what the main problem is. The wordplays was played, but until the closer which was good but still wasn't enough to beat R-Rated.

Bye.