lol at the shit goin on


alright ya verse had decent structure at the end it was gettin stretched...vocab was in good use in this piece and it should be since you do topical work....flow was nice...punches were aight coulda been worded somewhat better but like you said you're not a text battle so i take that into mind....opener=good and closer=ok..

best bars:
fags allways on vacation cause his computers rental expires
couldnt tie a punch together even if his dental was wires

and

you been on my dick thats why you simply gaze at my post
Went from TC to R.A.W to oh weLL, damn you a crew hoping slut

^^good personal

overall-8/10

RTF if you may...link in sig