word, i didn't like some of your wording in some areas, like the first bar.....said spit too much, lol......but i liked this, had some good lines, i think it could use a little tune up though, good start though.......and just a suggestion....in your last bar, you say "where the root is"....make that bar relate to like, growing or something, nah mean?....cause im feelin that meta, word dabate

keep up.

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