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IP:
Voted For: Daubs
Intermentals verse
IP:
Daubs's punches can be classified as WEAK-AND-POOR, your style type is BORE Your Threads coudln't be felt if they were SOLD in a FABRIC-STORE
^ for a start structure wack...fabric store punch i know it's been used so played...
You beating me is like TUPAC & BIGGIE resurrecting to do a VINYL You think you got a backbone? How when I just ripped out ya SPINAL
^ meh @ 2nd bar tupac and biggie played spinal ending ain't no punch personal not there wack middle bar
Daubs, these PUNCHES-HURT im like stomachs my CRUNCHES-SUBMERGE
Till your fill with a HURT AND BURN i leave this dude broken down in a stash like DUTCHES-N-HERBS
^ meh closer structure sorted itself here but punch wasn't ooo material jus focussed on multies and contrary to belief...multies don't win battles unless backed up wit punches and personals...which clearly weren't in this verse at all
Overall
Honestly...not feelin it structure was mad newb and the capping of the multies wasn't needed perhaps something simpler like "---" woulda been better...punches and personals were sacrificed for rhymes which was a weakness...overall dissapointing verse
Daubs verse
I have 'time' for crazy patients, so 'watch' this pshyco enter..
And i fucked with millions(milans) of brains so....................
.............................................no wonder Inter's Mental!!
^ nice flip on his name better opener IMO coulda toned down on the self-g side though and not feelin the 3 line lay out on bars but better than previous verse
Like firing faulty greetings, all you caterpult is insults..
And inter, you wouldn't be "straight G".....................
.........................................With bad exam results!!
^ nice good punch flowed well liked it
Inter man, your a has been who never even had it..
And you couldnt take my hitman status.................
................................If you were a crack addict!!
^ Closer = meh flowed better i'd say but weakest bar outta 3 definitely IMO
Overall
Better verse better layout better punches name flip was good 3 line bar thing i'm not too keen on but it was better than his layout yea piss easy win IMO you should really be walking this IMO have no idea why you ain't though
V/Daubs...RTF in my battle vs E.C within 3 days or vote removed
P.S Intermental do NOT remove this vote yourself because in all honesty...this was an honest vote i had no prob wit the vote you dropped in my battle vs E.C us need to clear that but i think you need to tone down the rhyming and focus on punches/personals more then try to blend it all together
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