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Old 07-07-05, 08:09 PM   #6
Sean Gunner
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Conjunctions:

Most of the time, you only use one or two. After that they become repetitive, or make a run on sentence. Instead of saying, "I washed the car and mowed the lawn and cooked dinner and did the laundry today" you can just say "I washed the car, mowed the lawn, cooked dinner, and did the laundry today".

Also, they can make the run on sentences.
"I went to the movies with my girlfriend and then we went to dinner for a nice meal out but she had to leave because of her mom because her mom wants her in bed before 11 but I ended up sneaking in her house because of my trusty ladder and we made out all night."

See, technically that is a sentence but the ands, buts, becauses, ruin it.
"I went to the movies with my girlfriend. Afterwards, we went to dinner for a nice meal out but she had to leave because of her mom. Her mom wants her in bed before 11 but I ended up sneaking in her house because of my trusty ladder. We made out all night."

Not the best example, but see how the flow still continues, even though the periods are there?

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