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Voted For: Pen N' Paper
You win because you had punches and flow and your lines made sense.
Verse: what a site it is seeing you question my credibility//
the city i rep makes florida a jelly bean//
your profusly stupid without a taste in music//
this cock raps without punchlines like slapboxing roosters
^this made no sense to me, had no punches, and didnt even rhyme. the city i rep makes florida look like a jelly been? wtff..
that line was wack as shit. then you just post random sentances TRYING to diss him that dont even rhyme
Pen'N Paper.. you need mad work on your wordplay. your lines were longer than stretch armstrong. however, you did make frequent attempts at similies and metaphors, and flow was there, actually looked like a rap. pz.
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