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Old 07-07-05, 09:49 PM   #11
bdotones
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Voted For: MC:Philosopher

somebody get a thermometer her temperatures a negative 2
so u wouldnt be a hot girl if cash money wrote the song for u//
hotgirl now come on i think your names a lier
cause she'll still have a cold if i set this chick on fire//
the only way u can get hot is if u die and got to hell
cause u couldnt drop hot shit if u just came from taco bell//
the batlles here now the pressures on u feeling it
i turn the heat on and this chicks still shivering//
its illegal to be this good like crystal meth
but bri couldnt spit fire with dragon breath//
hot girl................ cold lady is a correction
the only way she burning me is if i dont use protection

hot girl your verse was ok, but you have to put more word play and use harder punches

philosopher won this battle handily
punches, hella hard
word play, ok
great structure

vote on my battle at this link
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=198435
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