B.I.G.
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IP:
Voted For: Pen N' Paper
Verse -
ok this waz hapnin'.. nice personals n punchlines but yo flow was fucked up, no creativity, there wus a forced rhyme (that's bad)
Pen -
whoa! nice punchlines, creative punches, but still gotta fix that struture
opener - tie
closing - Pen
fav lines:
Verse:
"its humerous cause hell probably stay true to his intergers//
last time i check, hes 0-9, getting SWITCHED like his signatures"
Pen:
"Just face it man ur a piece of shit, ur compared to acid cuz u a waste
Tryin to start e-beef but he aint got no guts, so he gots his intestines to taste"
CONCLUSION
both had great personals but pen n paper's wuz more hard hittin' no hate...
V/ Pen
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