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Old 07-07-05, 11:59 PM   #15
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blisss......punches were kind of weak and u didnt stay wit consistant with the punches....your creativity was lackin a lil bit...your coulda fixed da structure a lil bit like re-word some things to make it all flow and transition better....

stanza-good creativity to start off wit...punches could have been a lil harder but it got the job done this time....the game line was nice lol....

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