*listening*

good beat....

your flow is gettin better...still not were it needs to be...cause it still sounds like your kinda talkin to yourself.....but it is gettin better than what it was.....

lyrics are pretty good...but you gotta get more into it and show more emotion....dont just rap into the mic...you gotta feel yourself...

quality isnt too good...but its ok....you also gotta work on your voice some...but that comes after gettin your flow down n everything....just keep workin

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