It was tuff i actually like the wordplay in the 1st line but u should stick more to one topic

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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious"

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