Voted For: MaRVJay1009
MaRVJay1009's verse
dis kid's fake i got tons of proof,he really aint got guns 2 shoot.
he's a nobody..even "small kids in iraq" dont "look up 2 troop".
^ Good opener wordplay on name ok good start
whut record label in they rite mind would wanna pursue ya???.
u'll neva rap offline u like "web cam's" u stay "on da computer".
^ Nice punch good rhyme was feelin this it made me go ooo
u got no flow ya bars r so so dis homo think's his style's good.
only "album we'll see w/ ya pic in it" has "photo's of ya child hood".
^ lol feelin this dope bar nice concept multi good bar
while im rippin a sick beat,luva boy troop lickin his chick feet.
not caliph,but ya girl slept with da "whole cali" 4 u da get in da 6 feet.
^ nice bar not as good as the above ones though i thought
cant believe u still a vet..not familiar yet? well marvjay i be da villian.
you no 'gangsta' son ya whole style's "WaCK(ed)" like "mafia killings".
^ Again aight but not as good as the others nice diss though
u aint gota "put ya CON's in my mouth 4 me da "eat ya VERSE'S".
beat troop 2 da ground he'll be like "gza's cd"..."beneath da surface".
^ nice closer ok rhyme
Overall
Overall...i like it i still saw some of the trademark writing you do but it's toned down ya verse was easy to read flowed well bars worked disses punches were good not too many personals but punches and nameplay worked well i'd say this was one of your good verses MaRV...
T.r.oo.P's verse
Its Obvious Jay's a Dinga Ling Fiend..... Yellin out Queens
Performing and Juggling Balls..... Closest Marv got 2 Kings
^ Ok opener lol @ dinga ling bit...-_- ok bar
Ea is Jay's Only Play......Jus Fuck it ya Harmless Marvlous
Sever ya Limbs to See if you can Hold ya Weight Armless
^ na not feelin it the rhyme itself is weak
Stop Takein Napz wit Female Pups talkin Like u got Layed
Actually the year "1009" Dashes in your Drops got Played
^ not feelin i think you could of took a different approach on his name
I Heard u was Coo wit Q?. 2 u Hes Probly Flippin Hot Man
Marv Fell off & Couldnt Rebound if he was Dennis Rodman
^ Q disses?...please homie thats played but rodman bit was aight
Are u in a Hurry 2 Get Off.Mus be cuz i can Tel.Ya.Pacein
Bunny Hoppin on Bmx's Is How Jay Bounces Wit Elevation
^ ok bar better than previous ones but still not making me go ooo
Yet ima Leave ya 2 Sorrow.... So im Certainly Hurtin Last
And this "Fams" Missing in Action Like the Old Urkels Cast
^ ok closer but kinda basic IMO
Overall
Whoa is this the same Troop???...ya verse at best was basic punches were meh-ok personals again non existent i don't think you put as much into this verse as what you usually do...someone with the rep you built in text this was quite a lazy verse IMO...
V/MaRVJay1009 RTF in my battle vs E.C within 3 days or vote rmoved
