I liked it, the story and / or concept line was golden, laid out very well and im suprised that no one has responded yet, the feedback has gone to shit. how shitty!

Anyway, i liked the whole thing, word choice, the way it read was really good, didnt bore me to where i felt like i didnt need to read the rest of it to get the jist, it had me eyes glued, good job.

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