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Old 07-08-05, 09:33 AM   #13
C-Hood
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somebody get a thermometer her temperatures a negative 2
so u wouldnt be a hot girl if cash money wrote the song for u//...
ok i am feelin it
hotgirl now come on i think your names a lier
cause she'll still have a cold if i set this chick on fire//
ok...not very creative
the only way u can get hot is if u die and got to hell
cause u couldnt drop hot shit if u just came from taco bell//
are you serious....wow this was nice..LMAO
the batlles here now the pressures on u feeling it
i turn the heat on and this chicks still shivering//
this was an ok attempt at a personal
its illegal to be this good like crystal meth
but bri couldnt spit fire with dragon breath//
haha...nice
hot girl................ cold lady is a correction
the only way she burning me is if i dont use protection//
great finisher...this had me rollin


Breakdown-An actual good verse....wasn't very complex but the punches in it made up for it...real nice overall rate is 8/10


You Claim I Was Runnin From U, Nigga Please Why Run?
I'm Not Scared Of U, I'll Shoot Yo Philosophy Lookin Ass Wit A Uzi Gun.
gun play wit no creativity=PLAYED
U Know What, Ima Have U Ridin In A Hearse.
If U Keep On Stalkin My Ass Everytime I Get On Rapverse.
ok
Mchilosopher Im Sorry 2 Tell U This, But U A Whimp.
I'll Fry Yo Ass In Yo Own Skillet, Like U Was A Piece Of Shrimp.
Elementary
Where U Gettin Yo Punchlines U Dumbass Homo?
Boooo.....nigga If U Ask Me, U Gone Be Da Next Lil' Romeo.
this is a no no
Nigga I'm Sorry To Tell U Dis But Yo Ass Is Mad Corny.
I Know U Neva Had A Girl, So Battle'n Me Must Make U Horny.
haha good finisher...


Breakdown-this wasn't very good...i liked your verse V.S. me better then this...this was real elementary and not very creative...if you put more thought into your rhymes it would be better...overal rate of this verse= 4/10



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