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Old 07-08-05, 11:59 AM   #16
Texxus
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this OM=completely weak and terminated soon......and it was mostly stupid in my opinion cuz you tried to aim this at the crew but then you spit about stanza...thats one person of the whole crew..you mixed up ya concept...and ya structure was the worst i've seen for a while....flow was aight...punches were wack...personals lacked...vocab was plain....opener was ok and closer didnt make since because it was choppy...

overall-3/10

keep workin on your diss tracks but not towards RAW or even me because I will come back with heat....werdness
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