Concept of the piece was very creative and you worked it out nicely in my opinion. I love how you portrayed the story through the eyes of different people, especially the last part of the murderer himself was very strong. The vocab was on point, had good amount of complexity but everyone could understand what you were trying to express. Flow was okay, structure was cool like I already said with the division into different parts. The emotion was pure, expressed the feelings very clearly and the imagery was there for sure. I could picture everything within my mind like watching a movie...

Nicely written piece!

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