first dude nic e flow lyrics are aight dont really like the voice but it works

your quality is horrible though so thats takin away from the delivery in my opinion

sounds muffled or some shit maybe u was too close to the mic
and also doesnt seem to be mixed well

second dude nice delivery,,voice ""kinda'" reminds me off cannibus without the illness

lol,,but yeah youre qualitys passes the audiblle test but like i said about the the 1st guy it isnt mixed well so thats takin away from the track but yeah the lyrics were nice

just work on your vocal editin process and the mixing of your tracks cause both of yoiur vocals were way too loud

try makin em blend better witrh the beat