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Old 07-08-05, 03:51 PM   #40
Wicked One
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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Pen N' Paper- your verse was pretty good...yo punches were good but didnt seem good lets just say decent...but they were good enough to win...your structure was blah...easy to read n all...could be fixed up a little bit...had some nice personals up there....but overall- 7.9/10...You got this battle with just simple and wayyyy better punches...

Verse190- your verse was aight, but seemed like a 10 year old raps like that seriously...yo punches were decent...nothing speical i saw...they didnt seem to hit hard or connect well...yo structure was good...but elevate on punches kid seriously...overall-5.0/10...Just elevate n all you'll get better hoepfully...
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