Mhmm, your stuff wasnt bad, could of benefitted from better flow and use of multi syllable rhyming and a few bars could of been worded better. But I'm impressed by your concept. And thats usually where a lot of people dont get it right.

Not a bad battle dude.. Now its jus the long ass wait for votes. -_-

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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