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Old 07-08-05, 05:47 PM   #8
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Voted For: Smoove

Smoove:

Good verse from you. Punches were mostly solid and well-worded, personals were good, flow was there...Had a few played lines, such as the closer...Well, it wasnt totally played, but you couldve worded it better, because Ive seen that concept flipped a few times. I loved the Jay-Z line. Overall, a real solid drop here.

GKillaz05:

Iight decent verse here. Had alot of played punches, such as the hot shit line. Thats about as played as they come man!! Closer was cool, coulda been better...Flow was pretty good, but he outdid you. Work harder on creativity and coming up with new things, not shit thats been flipped 1000 times before.

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