View Single Post
Old 07-08-05, 06:16 PM   #1
B.I.G.
B.I.G.
 
B.I.G.'s Avatar
 
Posts: 1,111
IP:

not so good, I bet this was ur first OM so no prob.. just elevate wit your structure, use a more extended vocab.. flow was aight, and make your verses a lil larger.
__________________


Bizzacckkk
  Reply With Quote