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aight im not much of a reader when it comes to readin a verse and the person puts them selfs in the 3rd person....but a great dop nun the less.
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Troop-i found ur verse to have great vocab. rhymin words everywhere but they werent multies in ma eyes...exellent structure made it easier to read....i think that you would do good in poetry aswell.....nice drop!
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Animosity-i thought that ur verse was fire after i read the first 10 lines.....it was kinda like a Stephen King Novel.....very 3rd personish but it kept me reading....and another great personal drop here again no lies no fabrication a true Open Mic....
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