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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Emotion:
Both Of You Came Well Here With Emotion Sok, You Had Some Nice Shit In Here Imagery And Shit Was Cool, LS Good Shit Man, I Like How You Speaked It
Imagery:
Aiight This One Was Tough Sok I Didn't Feel You Was Painting The Picture But Aiight That's Cool Man, LS You Painted A Small Picture, Which Was Good Here
Vocabulary:
I'd Say LS Took This One Right Here, Cause He Had More Complicated Words To Rhyme With, Sok Your Vocabulary Here Was To Basic Man No Hate
Structure:
Both Was Good For Poetry Man Which Was Good In This Matter, LS Try Making It Center Though
The Good Lines:
Lyriclesolja:heartless siege's of repressed pain,
pushed back but not built to contain,
~Katharisis~:Eyes wide shut in dark club corners,
Distorted reality - pointless orders
Vote Is LS Man
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