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Voted For: Pablo Escobar
ok rev dope concept and imagery on appraoching the topic nicely done your flow was horrible though and this aint rhyme at all
Rape, muder, money, when did these things become important?
I guess when getting juice was as important as smoking a blunt.
The end was just a book title but now it what I must right to a girlfriend,
Well I guess it's time to say goodbye, and to you I wish the best my friend
that hurt you badly in this here watch you syllabell count ive noticed alot of people dont in a topical work on that.but other then that your painting of a childhood to adult picture was nicely done as well as the underlaying intention of the poem also.7/10
pablo or whatever the fuck your name is this week good good flow helped you on this cuz it blended welly and that helped you win here imagery is good not as good as revs but not far off yet yours flowed toghther better and therefore was a more enjoyable topical to me.you approached the topic also welly here .this should be close if rev flow wasnt so badly done and his shit rhymed in the last 2 bars he couldve won this votes should be close.7.5/10
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No I wont battle you, usage of the word ducked is played. get over it Im mod........have a nice day.
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^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
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