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Old 07-09-05, 10:15 AM   #3
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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You Have To Add Structure To Your Pieces or It Makes It Entirely To Hard To Read.

I Feel Like Your Just Talking Within Your Poems, Use From Vocabulary and Emotion Throughout Your Verses. Be Creative.

Wanna See An Example..Go Look In "UE Cypher Session" The Shit I Dropped For Your Topic.

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