Voted For: flow verse

"Export," you got that right cause i'm about to "ship" you out of RV/
Cat even if you "elevated" your game and got "UPS" u still couldn't "deliver" a line that would impress me/
nice
cat u cat rap so give up on the mic/
dog the "punches" are just like those at college parties "spiked"/
ok...like dat wordplay wit cat and dog
and even if you rhymes attracted "AIDS" they still wouldn't be "sick"/
and this battle is over cause like "paper mache" you've just been "ripped"/
ok finisher


Breakdown-kinda of a short verse but for that it was nice...only line that was an ok line was that college line...could have reworded it to make it hotter... Overal 7.5/10





I'm Quick to Slap This Newb That Simply has no clue
Like a Tattoo, This Loss is always gonna be stuck on you
elementary
The Words that i Spit have Shredded-Yah-Credit
Iam a Soilder, yah A Pussy NewsCaster Embedded
ok
Yah Rhyems ant Hot, they Colder then Jack Frost
Only Blood yah spilled was a aids case at Red Cross
ok
This Ant Know Battle, Torture of No Prevention
Pay attention, I dont follow the Geneva-Convention
um...maybe
Study my words, Cause unlike Herbs, there Superb
no no


Breakdown-verse was below par...kind of elementary if you ask me...put more thought into your rhymes and try to put in a lil more complexity...overa 3/10

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