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Old 07-09-05, 02:10 PM   #4
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Voted For: MC:Philosopher

You Claim I Was Runnin From U, Nigga Please Why Run?
I'm Not Scared Of U, I'll Shoot Yo Philosophy Lookin Ass Wit A Uzi Gun.

Elementary—I see where you going with it but could have been better

U Know What, Ima Have U Ridin In A Hearse.
If U Keep On Stalkin My Ass Everytime I Get On Rapverse.

Ok— not over the edge but ok

Mc hilosopher Im Sorry 2 Tell U This, But U A Whimp.
I'll Fry Yo Ass In Yo Own Skillet, Like U Was A Piece Of Shrimp.

Still Ok--- I see the wordplay but I think u could have been more creative with it

Where U Gettin Yo Punchlines U Dumbass Homo?
Boooo.....nigga If U Ask Me, U Gone Be Da Next Lil' Romeo.

I thought it was just funny . . . I liked the line J

Nigga I'm Sorry To Tell U Dis But Yo Ass Is Mad Corny.
I Know U Neva Had A Girl, So Battle'n Me Must Make U Horny.

Good finisher --- especially how it connected back to the stalking line . . .

IP:
somebody get a thermometer her temperatures a negative 2
so u wouldnt be a hot girl if cash money wrote the song for u//

OK----- kinda elementary but definitely better than hotgirl’s opener

hotgirl now come on i think your names a lier
cause she'll still have a cold if i set this chick on fire//

Again kinda simply

the only way u can get hot is if u die and got to hell
cause u couldnt drop hot shit if u just came from taco bell//

LIKE IT------

the batlles here now the pressures on u feeling it
i turn the heat on and this chicks still shivering//

OK---

its illegal to be this good like crystal meth
but bri couldnt spit fire with dragon breath//

Not impressive @ all--

hot girl................ cold lady is a correction
the only way she burning me is if i dont use protection

LOL----- Yea crazy closer --- I’ll give it to you

Also MC: Philosopher, I like how you held the “cold” motif--- a motif is a reoccurring theme for anyone who didn’t know---
TRUTH
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