yo mc philsopher u r crew mayn! ima tell u watz good, ur verse wuz ok. need to wotrk on ur punchlinez mayn, an ur wordplay culd b betta 2, but i think u got da win here i wuz feelin sum ov ur rhymez, juz stay ''focused'' on making a mockery of ur oppenent, stay on a personal level miexed wit sum humouress pounchlinez, decent verse though mayn


uppin 4 krew

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