This was nice at points, but at others it had me a little undecided. It was more of a like......audio style, the way you formatted and spoke the words through an OM. I would suggest making it a little longer, add some creativity and in-depth storylines......Rap vs Love was a good topic to write about, and i think u wrote on it nicely. Just keep dropping, youll improve, check out Love is Blind please.

Pz