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Old 07-09-05, 10:22 PM   #7
K-Trin
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I battle hardcore, and I rap X-Rated
Imma kill you in this here battle
^^didn't rhyme and wasn't a punch
You an your lines should be cremated.
Your lines are garbage and not worth to be recyled man
^^didnt't rhyme and a very weak punch
Don't try to re-use them, just throw them in the trashcan.
Imma ''K-O'' you with Steve Austin's ''Stone Cold Stunner.''
^^didn't rhyme and not a punch
You beating me is when the Coyote catches the Roadrunner.
This is my first battle since being on ''Rapverse'' in 2004
^^^So wat if it ya 1st in a long time.......
You can't shift rhymes fast back at me, not even with a Z4.
^^gonna finish that bar?

You had no punches.None of the bars rhymes.Structure was terrible.Lot of your rhymes made no sense as they didn't diss.Like....why would we care if it's your 1st battle since last year?

Its Murder When Some Herb Like Dis Step Through The Door...
Cuz I'm Not Playing When I Say I'm Not Here To Baby Sit A 6 Year Old GIRL...
^^didn't rhyme.....weak punch
Ya Flow Must Be Weak,..Str8 Outta Pussyness You Don't Roll Deep Wit Heat...
You Stay Undefined,...Like Gun Shoots Goin Off On A WHITE PERSONS STREET...
^^^OK......first punch trown in this shit
Your Fresh From The "LOW RANKS" But Still Gotta Alot To Work On In Life...
I Know Its Hard When You Sit Down To Write And Wondering How I Got YA WIFE...
^^^Kinda stupuid.....but OK
We Don't Wanna Hear Your Wackness,...Strobe Should Give Me The Win Please "STOP DIS"!!!!.....
Cuz I'm Crazy..When You See Me Like The Grim Reaper How I'm About To SEAL HIS COFFIN...
^^doesn't rhyme well and too basic
I Know He Just A Little Fella,...He Ain't Gonna Do No Harm...
Dis Was A Easy Win,...Like Jason Kidd Throwing Out His ARM...
^^OK

Ur punches were pretty weak.Against anyone else you would have lost horribily.At least ya trown some punches so you got this shit easily.But work on makin all ur shit rhyme,wordplay,and metas.

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