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Old 07-10-05, 02:20 AM   #15
Skriptz
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Voted For: Black Queen

ok ..........i'mma start this shit off by bein honest...
u got a great chance of beatin me......................
................................in a dick measurin contest!!!!!
nope
and if you post before me, all i can say is oh well
your pc SHOULD run faster ..........wit those DSL's!!!!
okay
see i really can't front, you make my dick stand erect
but instead of fuck u...i'd rather take a shit on ur chest!!
nah
i really don't need a closer, shawdy just face facts.......
i beat u with 3 bars like a fuckin face mask
weak


Wussy crooks get knuckle-touched, I’ll fuck this bitch ass Fate up
Bust ya up with more uppercuts than an octopus could muster up
coo opener
Your verse say my word spray will hit you in the back and lymphs
Only way'd you'd get signed... is by unabbreviating your acronymn
weak
Speak flows from me like faucets, I’ll leave your doused an’ soakin’
Beat ya from your closet, with a bike wheel, so you'll be 'out-spoken'
aight
Ya spits get's me ‘pissed off’, like condoms flying off a virgin
Ya shit couldn't lift eyebrows if you become a plastic surgeon
decent closer


fate.. ur punches need some help, ur structure was okay
and the flow was decent, but elevate on ur punches here
cause u need to come way harder than that though,

bq.. ur punches were aight here.. structure was in place
and the flow was coo, but overall you came on top in this
battle here though..
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