stanza....nice drop.....short, clear and concise.....you stayed on the topic and delivered a nice piece with it, nice approach to it, vocab was kinda basic and cud've been better, it flowed nicely.....there was good imagery in the piece and the whole piece developed well.........props.


illumatic......decent drop.....another original approach to the topic....good flow throughout and you never fell off the topic.....you had more vocabs in ya piece than stanza, a lot of emotion throughout the piece....imagery of the verse was dope, make the reader able to picture what is happening.......like stanza i thought you cud've added sumthin more to the piece but ya still had a dope piece.

V/ - ILLUMATIC

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