Odi et Amo
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IP:
Emotion:
I feel that is a tie right here because both had a nice amount of emotion in their piece, both have a diffent style of emotion though, different way of expressing it which is good...
Topic Use:
I was feeling Sok's a bit more, I love how he viewed the topic and worked it out but Lyriclesolja had a nice approach as well so this was a close one
Imagery:
A tie again...
Sok's was good because you expressed emotion and immediately gave a clear image of it for instance:
What world would that be?
Just sitting thinking of philosophy,
Depression - Obsession - Emotion
Sunny beach days staring at the ocean,
Lyriclesolja painted a nice picture too but maybe not as consistent -, I felt it was more a emotional piece you wrote than an imagery one.
Vocabulary:
Lyriclesolja gets this one, he had more complexity but that doesn't always break a piece. Sometimes I enjoy basic vocab because it expresses a serene vibe.
The Good Lines:
Sok:
Written words with all they can give,
Art and Literature is all that we live,
Lyriclesolja:
all is lost when the fat lady sings her last tune,
one long sustaining note untill i meet my doom
My vote goes to ~sokaris~ but it was extremly close! Excellent drop by both!
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