Drakel:

Your Verse Had Some Originality In That Topical Piece. I Was Feeling The Direction You Took and How In Your Lines You Had Inner-Concepts Connecting Together. Was Pretty Decent. Your Structure Was Nice and Your Emotion Was Good. Overall Pretty Decent Drop.

Tweety:

Your First Paragraph of Scripture Was Medicore...Your Emotion Wasn't Really Pushed Through Too Much, but I Felt Your Direction and Delivery of This Piece Was Hot. As Your Second Paragraph Kicked In, It Started Grabbing My Attention More and Had Me Wanting To Read The Rest. Your Emotion Starting Coming Forth and I Just Felt This Was The Highlight of Your Piece.

Vote - Tweety...I Felt Your Piece More Than Drakels, It Just Stuck Out To Me More and I Related To It More.

~R~