Pen&Paper- You had an weird Approach which i didnt like. It kinda seems that you skip the whole plot and got str8 point to it...which was good but, you didn't pull it off very well. I liked your emotion which was alright, i've seen better from you and tell you the truth this wasn't your best. The imagery was ok...Like I said before..I've seen better from you. The words in your verse was basic...Didn't really had a good balance of good vocabulary.Overall Ok verse.

KingSolo- Alright, I liked your verse cause of the Approach you took. The imagery was good. The emotion needs to be upp a little. You had an good vocab balance in your verse. But It seems still to me that I didnt get what you're trying to say, I mean what was the breaking point in you?..But overall- Good verse.

Overall=Pen&Paper, I'm sorry but I'mma have to vote for LL cool K, basically he came more with the imagery and he edge it with the emotion and vocabs. Like I said before Pen&Paper I didnt like your approach, plus your imagery wasn't potrait better than LL Cool K. Vote LL Cool K

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