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Old 07-10-05, 06:26 PM   #9
K-Trin
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Voted For: Judicial

all rise the honerable philosopher presiding
fuck a jury once my verse is read thatll do the deciding
^^^self glorifing....not a punch
This cat need a court he cant spit game unless he wit it
but ill take the gavel off your avitar and beat your ass wit it
^^^meh..ight...but not a punch...more like gangsta talk
you think u hot but u really are not skilled
so ima beat u down and really make your ass get counciled
^^same as previous bar
the only law u enforced is that your wack and thats official
im like the supreame court im on top so u can fuck judicial
^^^self glorifing

U didn't have any punches.It all about wordplay and metaphors.U had too much self glorifing/gangsta talk.Gotta work on humilating the oppenent as much as you can.

think he "philosophyin" but im fryin dis verbally blinded "MC"
profililn wackness, he classified-in RV's worst of Emcees
^^^OK...not that hot though
let me paint you a picture, better yet how about a graph-ic(1)
kick-in your vocal cords around is the only way he can hack-it
^^^Ok......
the fact-is you handing me victories like its a religious practice
u just hopelessly-fake,game over its checkmate & embarassments your fate
^^^OK...

U got this easylily.Maninly because you actually had punches and not that self glorifing/gangsta talk shit.U still have loads of room for improvement...but keep at it.

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