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Old 07-10-05, 07:47 PM   #12
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Originally Posted by Dizzee Rascal
smh at people believing structure has to be the same for every single person
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wtf
i h8 it wen ppl comment about structure as long as its set it in bars
especially when used as a voting criteria when the structure aint relevant to the flow

no no no no ... her structure was soooooooooooooooooooooo fucked... it was almost impossible to read. i could read the flow in the lines but it woulda been better if she changed the structure so we could read it. some of those lines were kinda stretched bc she was tryin to sneak in too many fake multies but otherwise it was some decent lines... the only line i really like was the one about tephlon posin as a female... anyways, i think verb got this one wit waay better structure and some good punches... that tortilla opener killed her whole verse